Prospecting is Queen

Hi Kena,

From reading your experience, it’s very clear to me that your business is very professional. In the marketing world, prospecting is queen, but video and images are king. I appreciate that you want to sell simplicity and ease to your client, but that doesn’t mean having a website without images. I’m very excited to share my expertise with you to make your business shine.

It would be my honor to join your team as your editor and copywriter. Words are my paint brushes and there’s nothing I adore more than to create worlds of color for my clients to capture the hearts of their ideal customers.

I have experience in creating and editing content for websites, articles, internal documents, social media posts and email templates.

I’m proud to say that I’ve been told by Chicken Soup for the Soul co-author, Emme Aronson that a story submission I sent to her team was chosen out of thousands ‘because it was great.’ My story, “Beauty At Every Size” was published in their December 2016 book, “Curvy & Confident: 101 Stories About Loving Yourself and Your Body.”

Enough about me–I took a peek at your website and I love the royal, teal and charcoal color palate, but I’d like to help you with the site design.

Some of the changes I’d make are to give you a triple layer header banner, using a background image, a block of transparent color and on top of that adding text. I would also modify the alignment of the text box call to action for the free session and place that above the fold.

I’d create a logo and place it on every page. As your editor, I’d correct the misspellings on the button of your-you’re and training’s-trainings. I would also recommend that you put About Us and Contact Us on 2 separate pages.

I’d encourage you to focus your home page on what kind of experience you want to provide to your client. Those are just a few suggestions.

I’d love to have a chat with you and share more. I would like to invite you to review my resume to get a better idea of my qualifications so you can see if my skills are a good fit for your task. I look forward to touching base with you soon.

Warmest regards,


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